Short Story based on the Prompt:The Moment you seize to Believe is the Moment:
The Moment you seize to Believe is the moment Margaret was at. She roller her walker towards me and asked what my name.
"Patricia," I said.
"Patty?" She asked.
"No Patricia."
"Patty?" She asked a second time.
"No, Patricia." My voice raising, and my head coming closer to hers. She smelled of baby powder. She was smacking Juicy Fruit; probably the closest thing to anything she put in her mouth all day. She couldn't weigh anything more than ninety pounds. Her saggy skin was bunched up to hold together her bones. She reached for a Kleenex and another piece of Juicy Fruit.
"Patricia, huh?" She said. Finally getting it right that time. She asked me if she could have my number.
Should I give it? Should I give it? I wondered. Giving a woman with Dementia my number is a decision I could regret.
Saturday, July 30, 2016
Saturday, July 9, 2016
Saturday, July 2, 2016
“A clear sentence is no accident. Very few sentences come out right the first time, or even the third time. If you find that writing is hard, it's because it is hard.” —William K. Zinsser
Thursday, June 23, 2016
Emily Dickinson wrote over 1,800 poems. Only seven were published in her lifetime, all without her consent.
Tuesday, June 21, 2016
If
you don't feel like you are writing somewhat over your head, why do it?
If you don't have some doubt of your authority to tell this story, then
you are not trying to tell enough.” — John Irving
Wednesday, June 15, 2016
“I am faced with a stark choice between being a bad correspondent and being a good novelist.” — Neal Stephenson
Monday, June 13, 2016
“Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader—not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon.” — E.L. Doctorow
Sunday, June 12, 2016
Tuesday, June 7, 2016
“Every author, as far as he is great and at the same time original, has had the task of creating the taste by which he is to be enjoyed.” — William Wordsworth
Thursday, June 2, 2016
Sunday, May 22, 2016
Writing Style
Avoid phrases like "I heard" and "I saw". It separates the reader from the sensations.
Example:I could hear the creak of the door.
(Better to write) The door creaked as it opened.
Punctuation rule
If action is used as a dialogue tag, the dialogue should end in a period, and the action should be capitalized.
Example:
“This is silly." He dropped his hand.
“A story has no beginning or end: arbitrarily one chooses that moment of experience from which to look back or from which to look ahead.” — Graham Greene
Thursday, May 19, 2016
Besides writing The Canterbury Tales,Geoffrey Chaucer worked as a civil servant, a diplomat, a courtier, and a scrap metal collector.
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