Thursday, April 30, 2015

sculpture garden minneapolis

Tuesday, April 28, 2015

Short snippet on a story I'm working on.

"Ahh... this message is for Miranda.  Ahhhh.. this is Steve Corwell.  We received a note ahhh...  saying that you'd like to set up a time to meet with ahhh....,    Call me at your earliest convenience ahhh, 555,5555.  Thank you"
"There is a light at the end of the tunnel!" Miranda exclaimed.  A friend told her once that if she kept busy, work would come to her.

Sunday, April 26, 2015

"I never sleep cause sleep is the cousin of death"
i roll my time like a toothpick

ever accentuating- like a dime to big
i roll my time like a roll too big

Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Sunday, April 19, 2015

  • a total crap monkey without even a dime
  • untalented plaster you all sayin' forever.
  •  I dodged the bullet but never is ever
  • I stand here before you-
  •  not a care in the worle-
  •  I dodge the haters and the equal unshare

    we all the same,
    Everyone of us, all
    I'm out- shorty
    We all tall

    Friday, April 17, 2015

    Writer's tips

    Writer's tips
    1. When you're writing be careful of using the same adjectives and verbs.  They may come off as mundane or too repetitive: words like yawned, still and mostly.

    2. Making sure that you are separating ideas into their own paragraphs.

    3. Don't douse a sentence with too many adjectives or adverbs.  A sentence like: The puffy coats sat like a streaming stew is doing a bit too much.

    4. Cut the use of too many adverbs especially with "ly" .  Words like suffixes, mostly, extremely, tiredly should be dropped.

    5.Think about how close you want the reader to be to the person who is telling the story. 

    Wednesday, April 15, 2015

    I dreamed of becoming a writer.
    I set my mind to it since I was a kid
    i put it in my mind to finish my novel
    whether it is a success or not
    I want to finish
    I want to know what my steps are
    I want to pursue and be around the best writers
    never scared, never deterred.
    clear writing, more sophisticated.

    Tuesday, April 14, 2015

    Jewelry Heist

    Short Story

    Never to attempt a burglary before, he strapped his head with duck tape over his black ski mask.  "Now it should stay in place,"he said to his cat who  meowed and purred between his legs.  He was dared for the first time ever to be part of a jewelry heist.  This would be one of a kind;the gangsters of Hitcombe Bottom comprised of four men, four friends from the same private school who later gone to Oxford together and even graduated as business majors.  But when their business went down the toilet they had it in their mind to do something else.  Ralph was to meet Billy Bob and two others at midnight at Desmond Diamonds on the third floor where they would stop the elevator and climb down the rope inside the elevator's shaft.  They'd drill a hole and make two trips through the store through the entirety of the holiday weekend in order to pull off  heist London would ever see.

    If you were

    If you were...

    If you were a cat I'd bring a bat
    If you were a cow I'd say good-bye now
    If your were a lazy-day on a Monday
    I'd curl by your side and have a latte
    If you were a chocolate I'd eat you all up
    If you were a sign, 
    I'd have to say shut up.

    But you are not a cat
    Nor a bat
    Nor a cow
    You are not a lazy- day,
     It is not a Monday
    I can't sit by your side, I can't have a latte
    I can't tell you-to shut up 
    Because you are gone
    and that is enough.

    Saturday, April 4, 2015


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