(Better to write) The door creaked as it opened.
Sunday, May 22, 2016
Saturday, May 21, 2016
Saturday, May 14, 2016
I'm reading "The Nest" by Cynthia D'Aprix Sweeney. I didn't start getting into it until I plopped the cursor to the middle of the book and started describing a scene where a volunteer stole a sculpture from ground zero in order to commemorate a memory from his deceased wife who died on 9/11.
Friday, May 13, 2016
Thursday, May 12, 2016
Sunday, May 8, 2016
Friday, May 6, 2016
AMAZON!!! Why did I pay $12.53 for this on 2/1/16, just to have the price drop to $10.99 a few days later? Maybe I won't preorder things anymore, if I'm going to get ripped on the price.
review by DvusLeoGirl
Wednesday, May 4, 2016
Sunday, May 1, 2016
"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus:
1.What am I trying to say?
2.What words will express it?
3.What image or idiom will make it clearer?
4.Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?
And he will probably ask himself two more:
Could I put it more shortly?
Have I said anything that is avoidable ugly?